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Disclaimer: Okay guys, this is my first disclaimer. Ahum, I hereby declare that I, SarcasticWarrior have not written this story for profit and that all characters in this fic belong to Chinese history and Koei.
So I ask thy politely NOT to sue me.

Summary: This is a kind of sequel to Harborrat‘s fanfiction: Legacy of the LunarSpear.
In short: Xiahou Dun has married Lu Ling Qi, the daughter of the mighty Lu Bu, who had been executed by Cao Cao. To redeem her past mistakes  Lu Ling Qi sets out on a secret mission to capture the two Qiaos. While the Wei forces attack Wu she rides into the middle of enemy territory to capture the  famous beauties. Not an easy task especially because Ling Qi is pregnant with Dun‘s child…
Pairing: Cao Caox Da Qiao ,Xiao Qiao


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Loud screams and squeals of protest and pain interrupted the work of the lord of Wei.  With an annoyed sigh he put down the documents and frowned. “It better be something important  or else…” he muttered to himself.

He was not in a good mood lately. The army of Wei had suffered heavy losses at the battle against Wu and now even that peasant Liu Bei dared to threaten them!  And he himself was surrounded by blundering idiots who did not understand the nasty situation and the threats his kingdom was now exposed to. Or his arrogant strategists who thought they knew better than him were bitching and bragging about impossible new strategies.
He rubbed his temples. To make matters worse his migraine had become worse and the throbbing pain kept him from sleeping. Also his cousin‘s wife had been missing for 11 days now and Dun was blaming him!

He remembered their very first argument only two days ago.
“How could you send a pregnant teenager into the middle of enemy territory to get yourself two 12 year old  whores??!!”
Mengde sighed. Probably Dun was right. Even his best officers would  not be able accomplish such a dangerous mission. How could he ever expect that from a pregnant  17year old….?

His thoughts were interrupted as the huge doors slammed open and a proud Ling Qi marched towards his throne , followed by Xiahou Dun and Zhang Liao. The source of the squeals were being held by the 2 generals: the legendary Qiao sisters.

The one with the pigtails whose wrist was almost crushed by his cousin must be the elder sister. She was sobbing and tears were running down her handsome face. She yelped in pain and begged Xiahou Dun to loosen his grip. But the one-eyed general did not stir. Instead he cocked an eyebrow at his lord. He disapproved of Mengde‘s pedophilic interest in the sisters but he did not  interfere as Cao Cao walked towards them and roughly grabbed Da‘s chin to get a good look at her face.
Then he inspected the younger one, furiously trying to escape from Zhang Liao who held her down without any effort. He liked what he saw and in his mind he was already pinning Xiao Qiao onto the ground and ripping her clothes off and then he would…

“My lord? Is everything alright?” Lu Bu’s daughter asked. She had finished her report now.
“Yes. You may go now. I will make sure you will be well rewarded for delivering the Qiaos to me.”

Before dismissing Xiahou Dun and Zhang Liao he ordered them to put the sisters into bondage. The lord of Wei rubbed his hands gleefully. Now it was only him and the 2 famous beauties lying helpless at his feet…
©2008-2009 ~SarcasticWarrior
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Author's Comments

An illustration for this will probably be up soon ^^
Hehe until then this photo will have to do :P

:w00t: Again time to celebrate:
THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is indeed a happy DA week: 1000 pageviews,my first digital art and now my first fanfic.
I am proud of it because it is the first fiction I have ever written and it is not even in my mothertongue!
Please forgive my horrible english,I hope it is still understandable. And please do not hesitate to point out any grammatical errors. That is the only way I can improve my english :)

I hope you like it;)

This is fanfiction for :iconharborrat: fantastic fanfiction Legacy Of The Lunarspear

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:icondanceingox:
nice start again and ... huh? pedophile? CLOTH RIPPING?! CAO CAO!!!! OMG! it is funny but cool and I like it ;) when are you bringing the other part?

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Dance Ingox reporting for duty, B!t$H
:iconsarcasticwarrior:
Thanky you. There won’t be another part *shudders* Or do you want to read about a 35year old men raping two teenagers? (besides that I cannot write sex scenes)

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Never play leapfrog with a unicorn!
:icondanceingox:
...ok then...the sisters will be raped?! sorry am not a perve, I just didn't know ^^;

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Dance Ingox reporting for duty, B!t$H
:iconsarcasticwarrior:
I mentioned he is pedophile+he wanted the 2 qiaos+dun mentioned it+ he was already rippig xiao qiaos clothes off+ he rubbed his hands gleefully = he wants to rape the qiaos

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Never play leapfrog with a unicorn!
:icondanceingox:
LOL! but it's funny! it's not real xD... it's not real right?

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Dance Ingox reporting for duty, B!t$H
:iconsarcasticwarrior:
It is funny? I try to write some half-rape stuff with some sadistic pedophile and people think it is funny :p
No seriously I am glad you think it is funny although it was not intended to be (what is so funny by the way :P?)
And it is not real. Historically Cao Cao never even saw the qiaos but he had heard rumours of their beauty and wanted to lock them up in the bronze bird tower [his new harem building]so they can "pleasure" him everyday (quote from the novel, Cao Cao as 56 when he said that! Eeeugh!)

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Never play leapfrog with a unicorn!
:iconnaadir:
.................you are sick.

Grammatical errors and typos:

Para 2 - The army of WEI had suffered...
Para 2 - ...peasant Liu Bei dared TO THREATEN them...
Para 5 - ...Mengde's PEDOPHILIC interest...
Para 5 - ...liked what he saw and in his MIND he was already...

once again, you are SICK. now hurry up with that picture.
:iconsarcasticwarrior:
Thank you for pointing out my errors but if you do not like my fiction say it politely instead of you are sick :( I do not like that kind of talk

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Never play leapfrog with a unicorn!
:icondanceingox:
well...changing the past with the silly modern stuff IS! funny! it's like saying that Lord Sun Jian had a sexual satelite channels for his TV :p (I'm so sorry Lord Sun Jian!) I really respect that man...

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Dance Ingox reporting for duty, B!t$H

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